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Help me to reduce this sentence.!!!

Dear ppl:

some sentences but it seems too long. I want to apply ellipsis into the second sentence. I don't know whether or not I am correct since the ellipis s always difficult for a non native speaker as me. So Plz help me out.

My sentences are as follows: "During my literature research, I realize a current trend that researchers in the world apply the state of art in recognizing handwriting of their own languages. The Chinese researchers develop the recognition systems for Chinese handwriting; the Arabian researchers develop the system for Arabian handwriting recognition; the Indian researchers for Hindu handwriting recognition, the Thai researchers for Thai etc".

Do you think the following are ok? if not please help me.

Thank

Yours sincerely.
  

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[nq:1] some sentences but it seems too long. I want to apply ellipsis into the second sentence. I don't know whether or not I am correct since the ellipis s always difficult for a non native speaker as me.

  • [nq:1] some sentences but it seems too long.
  • I want to apply ellipsis into the second sentence.
  • I don't know whether or not I am correct since the ellipis s always difficult for a non native speaker as me.
  • [/nq] You'll probably get a different version from each person who answers, since there are many ways to tidy this up.
  • [nq:1]My sentences are as follows: "During my literature research, I realize a current trend that researchers in the world apply ...
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[nq:1] some sentences but it seems too long. I want to apply ellipsis into the second sentence. I don't know whether or not I am correct since the ellipis s always difficult for a non native speaker as me. So Plz help me out.[/nq]
You'll probably get a different version from each person who answers, since there are many ways to tidy this up.
[nq:1]My sentences are as follows: "During my l
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[nq:2]My sentences are as follows: "During my literature research, I realize a current trend[/nq]
[nq:1]...I realized.. Anyway, I would write it thusly: In the course of my researches I realized a trend, in that ... researchers have developed systems for Arabian handwriting recognition; Indian researchers for Hindi; Thai researchers for Thai etc". How about this?:[/nq]
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