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King Vu Posted 17 years ago
Letter Writing
Help me to mature it
Ciao ,
I'm italy student and i need to write a formal letter to my proffesor for asking my thesis, so i tried a write a letter by myself but i'm not sure about what i done.
Your comment will help me a lot and will improve my writing skill.
Dear Professor ABC,
How are you ?
I have just nice holiday summer in Italy. I passed in year 1st and just received scholarship letter some days ago and preparing for studying in year 2.
I have plan to research my thesis in next semester so I am writing to ask you about problems and contents in it. But I have some ideals about it : I want to research about problems: DEF. I am knowing that this problem is new one in my country and a very vital role in my future application for advanced study.
I would be grateful if professor could give me some comments and suggestions.
I look forward to your positive response.
Best regards,
I'm italy student and i need to write a formal letter to my proffesor for asking my thesis, so i tried a write a letter by myself but i'm not sure about what i done.
Your comment will help me a lot and will improve my writing skill.
Dear Professor ABC,
How are you ?
I have just nice holiday summer in Italy. I passed in year 1st and just received scholarship letter some days ago and preparing for studying in year 2.
I have plan to research my thesis in next semester so I am writing to ask you about problems and contents in it. But I have some ideals about it : I want to research about problems: DEF. I am knowing that this problem is new one in my country and a very vital role in my future application for advanced study.
I would be grateful if professor could give me some comments and suggestions.
I look forward to your positive response.
Best regards,
Top answer
Hi there, How about this? I'm not quite sure what you mean about the 'problems: DEF' part, so have left it as is and highlighted it in red so you know this part could need some more work. Hope that helps, Monty.
- Hi there, How about this?
- I'm not quite sure what you mean about the 'problems: DEF' part, so have left it as is and highlighted it in red so you know this part could need some more work.
- Hope that helps, Monty.
- Dear Professor ABC, How are you?
- I have just returned from a lovely summer holiday in Italy.
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Hi there,
How about this? I'm not quite sure what you mean about the 'problems: DEF' part, so have left it as is and highlighted it in red so you know this part could need some more work. Hope that helps,
Monty.
Dear Professor ABC,
How are you? I have just returned from a lovely summer holiday in Italy.
I passed my first
How about this? I'm not quite sure what you mean about the 'problems: DEF' part, so have left it as is and highlighted it in red so you know this part could need some more work. Hope that helps,
Monty.
Dear Professor ABC,
How are you? I have just returned from a lovely summer holiday in Italy.
I passed my first
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