help me to look at my reference letter from my boss,thanks

I am apply ing a master,it is a letter come from my boss,but i think there are some error,i need ur help,thanks.

Shengshi Jiayan Furniture Co.,Ltd

Beijing; 100027

P.R.CHINA

October.15,2005

Dear Sir or Madam

I am very pleased to know that Miss. Li Yan, a highly talented employee in Shengshi Jiayuan Furniture Co.,Ltd, is applying for further studies in your master program, and I am now writing to lend her my full support in this effort.

Miss. Li Yan has been working under my supervision for 3 years. As a professional furniture designer ,according to the one year’s working experience in our company,she bring forward a feasibility of the project to save the raw materials,let the material ratio in board furniture improve about 5 percent.And depending on the need of young people to furniture,she help me newly adjust the color of cloth sofa and beds,which meet more consumer’s requirement.Because she have a acute perceive to the furniture,I often dispatch her go to business trips,every times,she always give me a satisfactory answer.

A creative thinker,Miss.Li Yan is never confined to traditional ideas.She took the initiative to challenge the traditional Chinese furniture style.On the basis of extesive viewing and critique of overseas furniture,she explored several styles,which incorporated psychology and background knowledge of the audience.Miss Li Yan’s innovative methods were adopt in chair design,which give the furniture another beautiy..Miss Li Yan has forged a distinguished carrer because of his devotion and love of her work.

Judging by what I know of her, I believe that Miss. Li Yan has the makings of a good furniture designer. Hardworking, creative and cooperative, she should be able to build up a promising career, particularly if she can have the benefit of advanced studies in a developed country, where the technologies of furniture are much more advanced. In China, she finds herself inhibited by her lack of access to new theories, research methods and advanced technological know-how. I think it is wise of her to have decided to pursue master studies abroad. While I regret very much that I will lose an excellent assistant when she goes, I feel bound to support her decision, as I know this decision will lead her to new horizons and broader vision. I hope that one day she will return to China with new conceptual frameworks to take charge of the design furniture that she is now leaving behind.

Miss. Li Yan has a solid command of English. Over the past few years, she has helped me translate lots of foreign journals on design and technology. She is always enthusiastic about doing translations, as she believes it not only improves her English but also enhances her knowledge of the latest developments in furniture. Especially In 2004 GuangZhou furniture show,as the assistant of oversea's sale manager,she help our company sign many contracts from other countries,and a kind of sofa she designed received well.

I recommend her to you without any reservation. I trust that she will become an excellent student .I would greatly appreciate it if you could accept Miss. Li Yan as a graduate student.

yours sincerely

General manager,Suo Xingdong

Beijing Shengshi Jiayuan Furniture Co.,Ltd