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Topic : Some people believe that it's good to share as much information as possible in scientific research , business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too omportant or too valueable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

While some people argue that it's good to share information as much as possible , others hold that publicing information under scientific research , buseness or the acedamic world is not aceptable.Each of two view has its own meret.

There are strong argument in favor of giving out information freely.It's normal that scienctists update their own study in the internet about many aspects such as: politics, education, economy,.....this includes secret things. because of that, people have a wide sight of our live. what we 're mentioning is '' flat world''. it breaks the barrier among politics, economy,... anf ordinary people and leads to a new branch world- more modern, more devoloping.

However, there are plausible argument infavour of keeping valuable information secret. Nowadays, we 're having a large array of information. itj means that we have to know how to choose smarter.There are many bad information which bad for our country such as making people attack against our citizens our belief. Besides protection of intellectual property is very important. If you have a genious idea and you tell someone then he/she apply it on his/her work , so it's yours or hers/ his?

For short, every views has some advantages and disadvantage. Personally, sharing information is a right choice for our open-door world. But it's admitted that this also draws many chances to make nonsense information or solve them.