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Melsi Hayrapetyan Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing
Help me to improve my motivation letter
Would you please read if it works, and maybe give me some advice on how to improve it?
Do you think it is too short for a motivation letter that is generally requested to be one page long?
Thank you in advance for your support.
This is with reference to your advertisement on Europa.eu regarding the open position of an EVS Aide for an elderly people at Ntra. **** non-profit organization. With my great enthusiasm, good communication skills and experience with children (also disabled), I am confident I can perform this volunteer job extremely well and contribute to your facility’s operations efficiently. The volunteer-based program offered by your organization is a perfect opportunity for volunteers to strive to meet the emotional needs of isolated older adults, helping them to live a full life.
My name is Ann, I am 24 years old. I’m project manager for V*** and also I have a new startup. I also volunteer in different NGO’s and*** film festival in Albania.
Concerning my international experience I have participated in Au pair program in Germany, where I had to be very responsible, since I was dealing with children and their everyday needs. I also worked in Egypt, so I can say that for me there is no problem to understand and work with different nationalities and traditions.
Now, as far as hobbies are concerned, I am “addicted” to learn foreign languages, reading, travelling and theatre. I consider that they work together perfectly and that I could not possibly live without them.
Finally I would like to say that as a hardworking and tolerant person, I think I could fit in this project because I’m open-minded and respectful, and I have various interests. Working with elders will be a rewarding experience not only for me but the elderly person as well, seeing they will be very pleasing. I will be happy to help them in daily activities.
To finish, I would like to express my gratitude for offering volunteering in your organization and hopefully, at some point I can be part of your wonderful team.
Do you think it is too short for a motivation letter that is generally requested to be one page long?
Thank you in advance for your support.
This is with reference to your advertisement on Europa.eu regarding the open position of an EVS Aide for an elderly people at Ntra. **** non-profit organization. With my great enthusiasm, good communication skills and experience with children (also disabled), I am confident I can perform this volunteer job extremely well and contribute to your facility’s operations efficiently. The volunteer-based program offered by your organization is a perfect opportunity for volunteers to strive to meet the emotional needs of isolated older adults, helping them to live a full life.
My name is Ann, I am 24 years old. I’m project manager for V*** and also I have a new startup. I also volunteer in different NGO’s and*** film festival in Albania.
Concerning my international experience I have participated in Au pair program in Germany, where I had to be very responsible, since I was dealing with children and their everyday needs. I also worked in Egypt, so I can say that for me there is no problem to understand and work with different nationalities and traditions.
Now, as far as hobbies are concerned, I am “addicted” to learn foreign languages, reading, travelling and theatre. I consider that they work together perfectly and that I could not possibly live without them.
Finally I would like to say that as a hardworking and tolerant person, I think I could fit in this project because I’m open-minded and respectful, and I have various interests. Working with elders will be a rewarding experience not only for me but the elderly person as well, seeing they will be very pleasing. I will be happy to help them in daily activities.
To finish, I would like to express my gratitude for offering volunteering in your organization and hopefully, at some point I can be part of your wonderful team.
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eu regarding the open position of an EVS Aide for an E lderly P eople at Ntra. **** the non-profit organization, ABCD . With my great enthusiasm, good communication skills and experience with looking after children (also and d isabled people , I am confident I can perform this volunteer job extremely well and contribute to your facility’s operations efficiently.
- eu regarding the open position of an EVS Aide for an E lderly P eople at Ntra.
- **** the non-profit organization, ABCD .
- With my great enthusiasm, good communication skills and experience with looking after children (also and d isabled people , I am confident I can perform this volunteer job extremely well and contribute to your facility’s operations efficiently.
- The volunteer-based program offered by your organization is a perfect opportunity for volunteers to strive to meet the emotional needs of to help isolated older adults , helping them to live a full life.
- My name is Ann, I am 24 years ol d, and I’m a project manager for V** *.
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This is with reference to your advertisement on Europa.eu regarding the open position of an EVS Aide for an Elderly People at Ntra. **** the non-profit organization, ABCD. With my great enthusiasm, good communication skills and experience with looking after children (also and disabled people, I
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