Please post essays, paragraphs, dialogues and other writing in the essay forum so a moderator does not have to move your post. In an essay, you have to divide your text into paragraphs. Do you know about paragraphs?
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my correct essay:
These days, humans are all concerned about health problems, some individuals feel that the most effective method in ameliorating health is to do exercise every day. I strongly agree with the idea that doing exercise is the key to good health. Additionally, I believe that it is also vital for humanity to have and build their own balanced diet.
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