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Sells Best Furniture Shop



Oshakati



Dear Mr. Siluka



Thank you for doing shopping with us and according to our records you are one of our best customers who settle his account on time we are grant full on that. We have reviewed your account, and unfortunately you bought goods worth N$ 20 000 in March 2011, by mistake, according to the contract/agreement of our sale you was supposed to pay a monthly installment of N$ 2 000.00 for ten (10) months, however you did not pay any installment. We tried to phone you but we are unsuccessful.



According to our contract/agreement for creditor if our client fail to settle his/her account we will send him/her two warning letters and the third warning is the final and we can collect the goods you bought with us on credits, therefore, our deliverers staff members will come to collect the items you bought on 10 April 2011, if you do not settle your account within those days.



We wish you to always come do shopping with our Sells Best Furniture Shop and more benefit will come, as you are our best customer who settle his account on time and that was just by human mistake.



Thank you for your cooperation



Yours sincerely



E.Iihelele



Elwin Iihelele (Credit Controller at Sells Best Furniture Shop)
  

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Sells Best Furniture Shop PO Box 955 Oshakati Dear Mr. Siluka, Thank you for shopping with us. According to our records you have been one of our best and most reliable customer s.

  • Sells Best Furniture Shop PO Box 955 Oshakati Dear Mr.
  • Siluka, Thank you for shopping with us.
  • According to our records you have been one of our best and most reliable customer s.
  • However, we have reviewed your account, and unfortunately you bought goods worth N$ 20 , 000 in March 2011 .
  • 00 , but we have not yet received any payment , in spite of our two previous letters .
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Sells Best Furniture Shop
PO Box 955
Oshakati

Dear Mr. Siluka,

Thank you for shopping with us. According to our records you have been one of our best and most reliable customers.

However, we have reviewed your account, and unfortunately you bought goods worth N$ 20,000 in March 2011. According to our sales agr

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