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Hi dear Friends, Please help me to writing an application for leave.

The Managing director
Xyz Engineering

Subject: Application for leave

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to request you to permit me annual leave for 2month, i.e., October 20 to December 19, 2016.

The reason for this leave application is that, I am married since 3 years. so now we (me & wife) are hoping for a baby. Baby is a one of the most part of our human life. Now my intention is become a father.

I am hoping for your kind consideration regarding this matter. Please grant me leave for this period and wish us well.

Thank you for your consideration.

Sincerely yours,
Mr. X

** please advice me if I need to include some of extra lines.
  

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It is unclear if you want the time because your wife is going to have a baby during the time of your leave or not. Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to request annual leave for 2 months, from October 20th to December 19, 2016. The reason I am requesting this leave is that my wife of three years and I are hoping for a baby.

  • It is unclear if you want the time because your wife is going to have a baby during the time of your leave or not.
  • Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to request annual leave for 2 months, from October 20th to December 19, 2016.
  • The reason I am requesting this leave is that my wife of three years and I are hoping for a baby.
  • A baby is a top priority for my wife and me, and I am hoping that you will take this request under consideration and grant me the two month leave.
  • Sincerely,
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It is unclear if you want the time because your wife is going to have a baby during the time of your leave or not.

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to request annual leave for 2 months, from October 20th to December 19, 2016. The reason I am requesting this leave is that my wife of three years and I are hoping for a baby. A baby is a top priority for my wife and me, and I am ho
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EnglishmavenIt is unclear if you want the time because your wife is going to have a baby during the time of your leave or not.Dear Sir,I am writing this letter to request annual leave for 2 months, from October 20th to December 19, 2016. The reason I am requesting this leave is that my wife of three years and I are hoping for a baby. A baby is a top priority for my wife a

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