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Prem54 Posted 20 years ago
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help me to correct this email to higher mgmt
Hi Boss,
As GAR support is now quite stable and running smoothly, its time for us to look forward to expand the support scope and support level to be somewhat compatible with the FM team.
The areas of possibility that I could see to expand our support are on AAA admin tool, AAA database, including CD form & Access rights, and also LC policy and procedures.
Another objective for this support request would be to prepare us once the FM team migrated to as we here at GAR will be the pioneers for AAA support.
Thank you and have a nice day!
As GAR support is now quite stable and running smoothly, its time for us to look forward to expand the support scope and support level to be somewhat compatible with the FM team.
The areas of possibility that I could see to expand our support are on AAA admin tool, AAA database, including CD form & Access rights, and also LC policy and procedures.
Another objective for this support request would be to prepare us once the FM team migrated to as we here at GAR will be the pioneers for AAA support.
Thank you and have a nice day!
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Hi, I've edited this a bit, so please read carefully. Best wishes, Clive Hi Boss, <<< This is OK if that's usually what you say when you speak to him or her. As GAR support is now quite stable and running smoothly, it's time for us to look ahead to expanding the support scope and support level to be somewhat compatible with the FM team.
- Hi, I've edited this a bit, so please read carefully.
- Best wishes, Clive Hi Boss, <<< This is OK if that's usually what you say when you speak to him or her.
- As GAR support is now quite stable and running smoothly, it's time for us to look ahead to expanding the support scope and support level to be somewhat compatible with the FM team.
- The areas of possibility that I see to expand our support are related to the AAA admin tool, the AAA database, the CCC mailbox including CD form & Access rights, and also LC policy and procedures.
- Another objective for this support request is to prepare us for when the FM team has migrated to the CR location, as we here at GAR will be the pioneers for AAA support.
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Hi,
I've edited this a bit, so please read carefully.
Best wishes, Clive
Hi Boss, <<< This is OK if that's usually what you say when you speak to him or her.
As GAR support is now quite stable and running smoothly, it's time for us to look ahead to expanding the support scope and support level to
I've edited this a bit, so please read carefully.
Best wishes, Clive
Hi Boss, <<< This is OK if that's usually what you say when you speak to him or her.
As GAR support is now quite stable and running smoothly, it's time for us to look ahead to expanding the support scope and support level to
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