Help me to correct this application.

To
The Manager
(XYZ).

Sub: REQUEST FOR LOAN

Dear Sir,
I would like to inform you that I need of some urgent financial assistance apply for a loan for the amount of PKR 60,000 (Sixty thousand only) repay the company by paying every month the amount of PKR 2000.
I`m (XYZ) and I`m currently working in the company as Assistant Site Incharge in (XYZ) in last 6 years.

I would therefore request you to please consider my request sympathetically & grateful to you for your kind attention and obliged.
Hoping for your positive response.

Respectfully Yours,

(XYZ)