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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Grammar
help me to correct these sentences
I would like to send my wish to my friends as follows, but need your help to correct/refine it.
Thank yo very much!!
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To my dear friend,
It’s time for celebrating Chinese Moon Festival.
It’s also the time for getting together with families and good friends.
Attached is the card I would like to give to you.
Hope you are doing well, and look forward to see you again soon.
Best regard,
Ethan
Thank yo very much!!
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To my dear friend,
It’s time for celebrating Chinese Moon Festival.
It’s also the time for getting together with families and good friends.
Attached is the card I would like to give to you.
Hope you are doing well, and look forward to see you again soon.
Best regard,
Ethan
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You need not mention the card if it is attached. To my dear friend, It’s time to get together with family and friends and celebrate the Chinese Moon Festival. I hope you are doing well, and I look forward to seeing you again soon.
- You need not mention the card if it is attached.
- To my dear friend, It’s time to get together with family and friends and celebrate the Chinese Moon Festival.
- I hope you are doing well, and I look forward to seeing you again soon.
- Best regards, Ethan
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You need not mention the card if it is attached.
To my dear friend,
It’s time to get together with family and friends and celebrate the Chinese Moon Festival.
I hope you are doing well, and I look forward to seeing you again soon.
Best regards,
Ethan
You need not mention the card if it is attached.
To my dear friend,
It’s time to get together with family and friends and celebrate the Chinese Moon Festival.
I hope you are doing well, and I look forward to seeing you again soon.
Best regards,
Ethan
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But many people disregard the attachment in the email, that's why I would like to add a line to remind them.
How about this:
It’s time to get together with family and friends and celebrate the Chinese Moon Festival.
Attached is the wish I would like to send to you.
I hope you are doing well, and I look forward to seeing you again soon.
How about this:
It’s time to get together with family and friends and celebrate the Chinese Moon Festival.
Attached is the wish I would like to send to you.
I hope you are doing well, and I look forward to seeing you again soon.
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It is still awkward. If you are afraid that recipients will not see the preview, then paste the card into the email.
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It is still awkward. If you are afraid that recipients will not see the preview, then paste the card into the email.
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