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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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Help me to correct my paragraph

Hi, My Name is Lena Nils, I’m a new immigrant to Canada. I have trouble in speaking and understanding English. But I try my level best to learn English. I always make lot of mistakes while speaking or texting. So I thought to depend yahoo answers to learn English and correct my mistakes. Now I want to post few sentences could anybody correct that sentences and rewrite it in proper English. The sentences are

“I thought to send the book to Krista’s Address, because I think an address proof has to present in the Canada post to receive the parcel. You are new in that city so I guessed you might not have an address proof to present in the Canada post”

Friends, please correct this sentences for me
  

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Anonymous “I thought to send the book to Krista’s Address, because I think an address proof has to present in the Canada post to receive the parcel. You are new in that city so I guessed you might not have an address proof to present in the Canada post” Friends, please correct this sentences for me I thought I'd send the book to Krista’s address. You are new in that city, so I guessed you might not have a postal address.

  • Anonymous “I thought to send the book to Krista’s Address, because I think an address proof has to present in the Canada post to receive the parcel.
  • You are new in that city so I guessed you might not have an address proof to present in the Canada post” Friends, please correct this sentences for me I thought I'd send the book to Krista’s address.
  • You are new in that city, so I guessed you might not have a postal address.
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Anonymous“I thought to send the book to Krista’s Address, because I think an address proof has to present in the Canada post to receive the parcel. You are new in that city so I guessed you might not have an address proof to present in the Canada post” Friends, please correct this sentences for me
I thought I'd send the book to Krista’s address. You are new

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