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Hi! my name is yerin, Kim Ye Rin and I'm from Korea.
Now I'm 20 years old.
I've just graduated from high school.
So, I don't have much volunteer experience and also lack of english proficiency. But, I have reasons to apply the work camp.
First, I'm interested in travel, culture, and language.
I hope, I can communicate with peoples from many country all around the world. (enough to choose to major in spanish)
I want to become friend with members of Iceland work camp and get along to each other and enjoy traditional cultures of Iceland.
Second, my advantages is that I can listen, take care, and communicate with people well. I think, this advantages are good point for doing volunteer.
For example approaching people and sharing each other's feeling.
If I can take part in this camp,I will be more responsible than anyone else.
After the camp activity, I will introduce international work camp's purpose and be the person who has great potential for growth.
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