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Dennelton Sarch Mandiau Posted 12 years ago
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A team of scientists from a university in Australia created history in medical worlds for the first time introduced the use of bionic ear technology to restore a patient's hearing.
Professor Housley and his team from the University of New South Wales using electrical pulses that transmitted through the cochlear that cultivated in the ear to mobilize the Deoxyribonucleic Acid (DNA) cells to near the electrodes specially mounted.
Then the cell will produce proteins for repair of nerves in the ear. Cell proteins known as neurotrophins are important to the development, function, and survival of nerve lifespan of human organs, including the ear.
Patients using cochlear implants previously can understand the speech of others, but not all tone can be understood, caused they cannot enjoy a good sound quality of the music.
After doing research for five years, the team found a better way to use electric current to stimulate the nerves in part of the ear to restore patient hearing using cochlear.
Although the increase in protein cell decreases in a few months, changes in the auditory nerve that happened before will remain due to the use of cochlear implants.
There are no cochlear implant users, ever get cell treatment that is provided to them before. Through the new method, cochlear implants will be more effective against patients with hearing problems.
In his writing, Housley was confident he would find a way of treating neurological diseases such as Parkinson's and run psychiatric treatment through therapeutic cells.
Professor Housley and his team from the University of New South Wales using electrical pulses that transmitted through the cochlear that cultivated in the ear to mobilize the Deoxyribonucleic Acid (DNA) cells to near the electrodes specially mounted.
Then the cell will produce proteins for repair of nerves in the ear. Cell proteins known as neurotrophins are important to the development, function, and survival of nerve lifespan of human organs, including the ear.
Patients using cochlear implants previously can understand the speech of others, but not all tone can be understood, caused they cannot enjoy a good sound quality of the music.
After doing research for five years, the team found a better way to use electric current to stimulate the nerves in part of the ear to restore patient hearing using cochlear.
Although the increase in protein cell decreases in a few months, changes in the auditory nerve that happened before will remain due to the use of cochlear implants.
There are no cochlear implant users, ever get cell treatment that is provided to them before. Through the new method, cochlear implants will be more effective against patients with hearing problems.
In his writing, Housley was confident he would find a way of treating neurological diseases such as Parkinson's and run psychiatric treatment through therapeutic cells.
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Dennelton Sarch Mandiau A team of scientists from a university in Australia created history in medical worlds for the first time introduced the use of bionic ear technology to restore a patient's hearing. The sentence has two verbs and is structurally unsound. Dennelton Sarch Mandiau Professor Housley and his team from the University of New South Wales using electrical pulses that transmitted through the cochlear that cultivated in the ear to mobilize the Deoxyribonucleic Acid (DNA) cells to near the electrodes specially mounted.
- Dennelton Sarch Mandiau A team of scientists from a university in Australia created history in medical worlds for the first time introduced the use of bionic ear technology to restore a patient's hearing.
- The sentence has two verbs and is structurally unsound.
- Dennelton Sarch Mandiau Professor Housley and his team from the University of New South Wales using electrical pulses that transmitted through the cochlear that cultivated in the ear to mobilize the Deoxyribonucleic Acid (DNA) cells to near the electrodes specially mounted.
- This sentence has no main verb.
- It is structurally incoherent.
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Dennelton Sarch MandiauA team of scientists from a university in Australia created history in medical worlds for the first time introduced the use of bionic ear technology to restore a patient's hearing.The sentence has two verbs and is structurally unsound.
Dennelton Sarch MandiauProfessor Housley and his team from the University of N
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Thanks AlpheccaStars. I hope you can help me learn standard english.
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Dennelton;
You are obviously trying very very hard to be scientific and write complicated and impressive sentences, sentences that would appear in scientific journals. But it is very easy to make mistakes when you try so hard.
Start with very simple sentences. Then you can combine them to make excellent, scientific and grammatical sentences.
You are obviously trying very very hard to be scientific and write complicated and impressive sentences, sentences that would appear in scientific journals. But it is very easy to make mistakes when you try so hard.
Start with very simple sentences. Then you can combine them to make excellent, scientific and grammatical sentences.
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Thanks AlpheccaStars. However, my english is weak about 60% marks in class.
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