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Ghai_prince13 Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
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1 b 00 For today you should do your homework but on the certain circumstances could not make it. You talk to the teacher: 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 1) Inform on the developed situation; 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 2) explain, why you have not carried out the task; 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 3) Tell when can prepare your homework. 02 b 02 br
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00 I usually do my homework but unfortunately I couldn’t do my task which was given for today. It was my birthday I felt unhappy because I was wished by nobody. Nobody was at home .I got bored so I decided I go out for an hour. I was back home .I tried to open the door but I couldn’t for one minute I got shocked I thought that there were thief’s in my house then I rang the bell and my mother opened the door and all my friends were there and wished me .then we cut the cake, played games, had dinner while listening to music. We enjoyed a lot I thanked my parents and friend for the surprise party. The party ended very late was quite tired and I had completely forgotten about my homework. As I’m a hardworking and I have good impression on my teacher so I requested her asking her do it for tomorrow and she agreed 0-
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01 b 00 1) Inform on the developed situation; 02 b 02 br
02 br
01 b 00 2) explain, why you have not carried out the task; 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 3) Tell when can prepare your homework. 02 b 02 br
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00 I usually do my homework but unfortunately I couldn’t do my task which was given for today. It was my birthday I felt unhappy because I was wished by nobody. Nobody was at home .I got bored so I decided I go out for an hour. I was back home .I tried to open the door but I couldn’t for one minute I got shocked I thought that there were thief’s in my house then I rang the bell and my mother opened the door and all my friends were there and wished me .then we cut the cake, played games, had dinner while listening to music. We enjoyed a lot I thanked my parents and friend for the surprise party. The party ended very late was quite tired and I had completely forgotten about my homework. As I’m a hardworking and I have good impression on my teacher so I requested her asking her do it for tomorrow and she agreed 0-
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0 I usually do my homework but unfortunately I couldn’t do my task which was given for today. 01 font 00 Later 02 font 00 , we cut the cake, played games, had dinner while listening to music. We enjoyed a lot 01 font 00 and 02 font 00 I thanked my parents and friend 01 font 00 s 02 font 00 for the surprise party.
- 0 I usually do my homework but unfortunately I couldn’t do my task which was given for today.
- 01 font 00 Later 02 font 00 , we cut the cake, played games, had dinner while listening to music.
- We enjoyed a lot 01 font 00 and 02 font 00 I thanked my parents and friend 01 font 00 s 02 font 00 for the surprise party.
- The party ended very late 01 font 00 and I 02 font 00 was quite tired and 01 del 00 I 02 del 00 had completely forgotten about my homework.
- As I’m a hardworking 01 font 00 student 02 font 00 and 01 del 00 I 02 del 00 have good impression on my teacher 01 del 00 so 01 font 00 , 02 font 02 del 00 I 01 del 00 requested her asking her do it for tomorrow and she agreed 02 del 00 01 font 00 wanted her to give me one more chance to do my homework and thanks to her kindness she accepted.
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0 I usually do my homework but unfortunately I couldn’t do my task which was given for today. It was my birthday I felt unhappy because 01 del 00 I was wished by nobody 02 del 01 font 00 no one remembered my birthday 02 font 00 ..Nobody was at home .I got bored so I decided 01 del 00 I 02 del 01 font
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