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Topic: Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People have different views about whether we should share as mush as possible in scientific research, business and academic world or not. Although there are some advantages of publishing information in those majors, I would argue that it is better to make readers charge a free for important information.

There are some good arguments for sharing information in scientific research, business and academic world freely. People are living in the technological age, therefore they can immediately update necessary information. The information about science, business and academy can help them to enhance their knowledge. The citizens' knowledge is considered as a crucial part for developing countries. As a result, sharing free information helps people to access valuable information easier.

Despite the above arguments, I believe that it is better to make people charge a free when they read valuable scientific research, business and academic world. Those information are too valuable to read freely. If they must pay money to read it, they will feel the value of this information. Furthermore, it will be logical when people pay money to receive the valuable information from others' gray matter. The writers have spent a lot of their time researching and collecting information. They should be received reward for their efforts.

In conclusion, it seems to me that it is better to make people charge a free for reading important information. This is fair for both readers and writers who know the value of knowledge.