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People have different view about whether children can learn how to be good members of society from their parents or from school. Althought there are a lot of advantages of school where a children can learn how to be a good person, I would argue that it is better to learn from parents.

Nowadays, school is considered as a crucial element for children’s growth. Children can gain a wide range of knowledge from their teachers and friends. For children, school is look like their second home and they can feel comfortable to learn everything from it. It leads to the fact that school will easily become the good place where children can learn how to be nice people of society.

It is true that school is the good place for children to learn but it is not the best choice. Children is effected by people who are usually around them. In children’s daily routine, their parents occupy there ? time. Therefore, it is convenient for fathers and mothers to teach children. For instance, if a little daughter throw rubbish on road while family are walking, her parents will immediately ask her to throw it in the right place. Since parents have a lot of time with their children, they have strong position in teaching children.

In conclusion, school and family are both good place for children to learn how to be good citizens. It seems to me that children can learn better if they learn it from their parents.