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Write a short article describing a wonder of Viet Nam:

It is said that the ancient town of Hoi An is one of the must-see places in Viet Nam by virtue of its old architecture and serene scenery which can mesmerize any tourist. Hoi An, which has a unique architecture, is located on the coast of Vietnam East Sea. it is considered as the perfect destination for those who love old architecture and serene scenery. What's more, it used to be one of the most important trading ports in Southeast Asia in the 16th century. The Ancient Town of Hoi An is famous for historic structures such as the Phuc Kien Assembly Hall, the Japanese Covered Bridge, and the ancient houses. The cult of Hoi An is not only associated with historic structures but also museums or a collection of temples, pagodas, shop houses, and private homes. Besides, streets decorated with colorful lanterns are of the essence when it comes to Hoi An. The picturesque ancient town of Hoi An is the place where is worth visiting during the Viet Nam tour. It’s recommended that Hoi An is great to hunt traces of foreign merchants.

  

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Here are some edits and suggestions. You also might try to organize this article into paragraphs. I was interested to read this, because I visited Hoi An some years ago.

  • Here are some edits and suggestions.
  • You also might try to organize this article into paragraphs.
  • I was interested to read this, because I visited Hoi An some years ago.
  • I remember seeing people in a store making silk and for the first time in my life I saw silk worms.
  • Clive Write a short article describing a wonder of Viet Nam: It is said that the ancient town of Hoi An is one of the must-see places in Viet Nam by virtue of its old architecture and serene scenery which can mesmerize any tourist.
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Here are some edits and suggestions. You also might try to organize this article into paragraphs.

I was interested to read this, because I visited Hoi An some years ago. I remember seeing people in a store making silk and for the first time in my life I saw silk worms.

Clive

Write a short article describing a wonder of Viet Nam:

It is said that

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