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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
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Hi Sally,

I am sending you the revised Document of our project, soon as possible. I've already modified the program based on your requirements.If you have any concern/questions regarding to the attached file, please let me know. Im hoping that we could close this project as soon as possible and after you have approved the project, we can upload this site to our official website.

Thanks
  

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I will be sending you the revised document of our project at the earliest possible. The program has already been modified based on your requirements. If you have any concerns/questions regarding the attached file, please let me know.

— Benita

  • I will be sending you the revised document of our project at the earliest possible.
  • The program has already been modified based on your requirements.
  • If you have any concerns/questions regarding the attached file, please let me know.
  • I/We look forward to closing this project at the earliest after your approval..
  • We can upload this site to our official website.
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I will be sending you the revised document of our project at the earliest possible.

The program has already been modified based on your requirements.

If you have any concerns/questions regarding the attached file, please let me know.

I/We look forward to closing this project at the earliest after your approval..

We can upload this site to our official websit
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I assume that you are going to send the document. In case you are attaching the document with the below mentioned note/email, then you need to start off as 'Please find attached' or in case you are sending it by post(snail mail) then you can use 'Please find enclosed'.
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I'd simplify things a tad...for example:

Hi Sally,
I'll send you the revised project document as soon as possible. I've already modified the program per your requirements. Upon your approval, we can upload this site to our website and close out the project. If you have any questions or concerns about the attached file, please let me know.

Thanks,
Anonymous
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I am sending this email and the project document i am refering to is attached in this email...

Thanks
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