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WANG CHUN Posted 21 years ago
Grammar
Help me solve grammar question.Thank you
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I am not sure whether these sentences are right or not?
Can you help me check them and tell ne how to revise them
Thank you very much
As a result of obtaining appropriate love and concern, he will be shape into a positive and optimistic attitude to face the rest of his lives.
Only when children receive formal education, do they become moral, intellectual, and responsible adults.
I am not sure whether these sentences are right or not?
Can you help me check them and tell ne how to revise them
Thank you very much
As a result of obtaining appropriate love and concern, he will be shape into a positive and optimistic attitude to face the rest of his lives.
Only when children receive formal education, do they become moral, intellectual, and responsible adults.
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Here's what I would do, **** Chun:
'If he receives love and concern, he will develop a positive, optimistic attitude toward life.'
'Only when children receive a formal education do they become morally and ethically responsible adults.'
'If he receives love and concern, he will develop a positive, optimistic attitude toward life.'
'Only when children receive a formal education do they become morally and ethically responsible adults.'
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