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Bigpie Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing
Help me!! short pharagraphs~!! Thanks in advance!!!!
Apart from the love, my life had always reminded me of reality, so standing on my own two feet was not an option, but a destiny.
Since 15, I had worked many kinds of part time jobs such as delivering news papers in dawn, washing dishes in restaurants and even labor working at the construction site on weekends until I was graduated from High School. ///
Even if I passed the English proficiency test, that was nothing but a basic test for the study. While I was working and studying simultaneously, writing tens of thousands words in every month for assignments was almost killing me.
*******PLEASE CHECK MY WRITING****** AND GIVE ME YOUR MARK! VERY BAD/BAD/NOT BAD/GOOD...
THANKS A LOT!!
Since 15, I had worked many kinds of part time jobs such as delivering news papers in dawn, washing dishes in restaurants and even labor working at the construction site on weekends until I was graduated from High School. ///
Even if I passed the English proficiency test, that was nothing but a basic test for the study. While I was working and studying simultaneously, writing tens of thousands words in every month for assignments was almost killing me.
*******PLEASE CHECK MY WRITING****** AND GIVE ME YOUR MARK! VERY BAD/BAD/NOT BAD/GOOD...
THANKS A LOT!!
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Apart from love , my life had always reminded me of reality, so standing on my own two feet was not an option but m y destiny. Since 15, I had worked at many kinds of part time jobs , such as delivering newspapers at dawn, washing dishes in restaurants and even laboring at construction sites on weekends, until I graduated from high school. Even if I passed the English proficiency test, that was nothing but a basic test for English study.
- Apart from love , my life had always reminded me of reality, so standing on my own two feet was not an option but m y destiny.
- Since 15, I had worked at many kinds of part time jobs , such as delivering newspapers at dawn, washing dishes in restaurants and even laboring at construction sites on weekends, until I graduated from high school.
- Even if I passed the English proficiency test, that was nothing but a basic test for English study.
- I was working and studying simultaneously, and writing tens of thousands of words every month for assignments was almost killing me.
- MARKS: Grammar & Structure - NOT BAD Expression - GOOD Cohesion - NOT SO GOOD
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Apart from love, my life had always reminded me of reality, so standing on my own two feet was not an option but my destiny.
Since 15, I had worked at many kinds of part time jobs, such as delivering newspapers at dawn, washing dishes in restaurants and even laboring at construction sites on weekends, until I graduated from
Since 15, I had worked at many kinds of part time jobs, such as delivering newspapers at dawn, washing dishes in restaurants and even laboring at construction sites on weekends, until I graduated from
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Your grammar is fine...to understand ur skill, u must write more to see..
thanx:)
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