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Emily Brown
1640 Riverside Drive, Hilldale, CA 93505
760-555-1210 (tel), 760-555-1955 (fax)
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EXPERIENCE AND ACCOMPLISHMENTS
Troubleshooting and problem-solving skills
• Runner-up of Super Aircraft Designing Contest, state level.2007
- Investigated, resolved and designed an endurable futuristic aircraft
• School representative of English Parliamentary Debate, district level 2008. -Researching
Excellent organizational skills
• Awarded "Excellent Performance" by the Vice Director of Education Department for great achievement in Leadership and Motivation Camp .
• Organised various tasks in school library as School Liberian
• Organised various events for the school's Physics Club as club's committee member.
Sport events
• School representative of throwing events, i.e Shot Put and Javelin Throw, district level.
Strong computer skills
SCHOOL ORGANIZATIONS
SMK school Physics Club - 2007- 2008
-Committee member - 2008
SMK school Track and field athletics Club - 2007- 2008
-Committee member - 2007-2008
SMK school School Library - 2007-2008
-Student Librarian
SMK school St. John Ambulance - 2007-2008
-Casual member
  

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2007 - Investigated, resolved and designed an endurable futuristic aircraft • School representative of English Parliamentary Debate, district level 2008. -Researching Excellent organizational skills • Awarded "Excellent Performance" by the Vice Director of Education Department for great achievement in Leadership and Motivation Camp . • Organised various tasks in school library as School Liberian • Organised various events for the school's Physics Club as club's committee member.

  • 2007 - Investigated, resolved and designed an endurable futuristic aircraft • School representative of English Parliamentary Debate, district level 2008.
  • -Researching Excellent organizational skills • Awarded "Excellent Performance" by the Vice Director of Education Department for great achievement in Leadership and Motivation Camp .
  • • Organised various tasks in school library as School Liberian • Organised various events for the school's Physics Club as club's committee member.
  • e Shot Put and Javelin Throw, district level.
  • Strong computer skills SCHOOL ORGANIZATIONS SMK school Physics Club - 2007- 2008 -Committee member - 2008 SMK school Track and field athletics Club - 2007- 2008 -Committee member - 2007-2008 SMK school School Library - 2007-2008 -Student Librarian SMK school St.
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Emily Brown
1640 Riverside Drive, Hilldale, CA 93505
760-555-1210 (tel), 760-555-1955 (fax)
(Email removed)
EXPERIENCE AND ACCOMPLISHMENTS
Troubleshooting and problem-solving skills

• Runner-up of Super Aircraft Designing Contest, state level.2007
- Investigated, resolved and designed an endurable futuristic aircraft
• School representative of Englis

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