If you think they are okay as it is, please say so, or give some feedback. If you can shorten it, if the sentence works without a word, please tell me.
Thesis:
"The American dream cannot be realized through society’s corruption and prejudice."
"However, society’s injustices against humanity leads George to recognize their dreams’ futility"
"Capitalism’s corruption of society leads to the futility of the American dream. "
"This represents the pure ideals of freedom and equality America founded itself on. "
"He alludes to the migrant workers’ disillusionment when they arrive in California and suffer from discrimination and exploitation as cheap labor. "
-this one seems like a run on, could anyone rephrase this?
"The unequal treatment of the ranch’s workers suggests society’s inhospitality to dreams."
"Curley’s lust for revenge leads to his indifference toward Lennie’s humanity."
any help at all is appreciated, thanks in advance
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