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I wrote an email to a proffesor. This is a part of the email and i hope some one can correct it for me.

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I am very interested in plant biotechnology. I took plant biotechnology course and my graduate research was in Medical plants, plus Tobacco plant and Venus flytrap plant. All these made me very interested to continue education in the same field. I wish to get an opportunity to work in your lab under your guidance. Your research projects are really attracted me and I hope to gain more experience about them.

Fandorin · Accepted Answer

Hey Nana. Welcome to EF.

nana555I wrote an email to a proffesor. This is a part of the email and I hope some one can correct it for me.
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I am very interested in plant biotechnology. I took plant biotechnology course and my graduate research included working experience in Medical plants, Tobacco plant and Venus flytrap plant. Those made me very interested in continuing education in the sphere of biotechnology. I wish to get an opportunity to work in your lab under your guidance. Your research projects attract me and I would like/hope to gain more experience.

Nana555 · Answer

Thank you so much Fandorin : )

Regardsssss

Markroe · Answer

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I’m looking for a two- or three-bedroom apartment to rent, as soon as possible, for two people, preferably close to Apple Road. I work at June Intl. Building, which is on that street. Since I usually take Line 9 to work, it would be convenient to live close to a metro station.

Is it easier to find an apartment after the national holiday? (I’m not in a rush.) Since I would like to stay at least 1½ to 2 years, I want to make sure that the apartment is comfortable and that I like it. I have checked a number of places in NYC but have not yet found the ideal one. Maybe you can end my search!

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