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Nana555 Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Help me pls : )
This is a part of my essay, hope some one can help and correct
Thanks in advance
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The third idea for women’s rights is to make her privilege to lead a big business (Company or Industry). Some of business companies prefer to hire a man not a woman even if they are both have the same experience and knowledge. The reason of that some people think that the woman is less confidence and independent than man and she might have more mistakes than the man does. That opinion start to be changed when they noticed many successful samples of business women who lead her own business and succeed. So the only thing that woman needs is to give her a chance to find herself in a proper place.
Thanks in advance
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The third idea for women’s rights is to make her privilege to lead a big business (Company or Industry). Some of business companies prefer to hire a man not a woman even if they are both have the same experience and knowledge. The reason of that some people think that the woman is less confidence and independent than man and she might have more mistakes than the man does. That opinion start to be changed when they noticed many successful samples of business women who lead her own business and succeed. So the only thing that woman needs is to give her a chance to find herself in a proper place.
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first of all, i'd like to tell you that i am a chinese, i just want make some foreign friends here. i read your short essay, because of different culture, i can't give you any corrections, but i could give you some chinese tips. i don't think women are not confidence and independent, some of them have both of the characteristcs.
- first of all, i'd like to tell you that i am a chinese, i just want make some foreign friends here.
- i read your short essay, because of different culture, i can't give you any corrections, but i could give you some chinese tips.
- i don't think women are not confidence and independent, some of them have both of the characteristcs.
- but in chinese traditonal concept, some people always think that men always more power than wemen.
- maybe because of in chinese history, every king was men.
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first of all, i'd like to tell you that i am a chinese, i just want make some foreign friends here.
i read your short essay, because of different culture, i can't give you any corrections, but i could give you some chinese tips.
i don't think women are not confidence and independent, some of them have both of the characteristcs. but in chinese traditonal concept, some people alw
i read your short essay, because of different culture, i can't give you any corrections, but i could give you some chinese tips.
i don't think women are not confidence and independent, some of them have both of the characteristcs. but in chinese traditonal concept, some people alw
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Hi Allen, Thank you for your comments
I think u missunderstood me. My essay is about Women's rights and I try to say that some countries don't respect the woman, that for some reasons and my previous paragraph was the third reason that I think why they do not respect the woman. So my paragraph is to correct the openion of the women ability : )
I'm a girl and I belive in WOMAN
I think u missunderstood me. My essay is about Women's rights and I try to say that some countries don't respect the woman, that for some reasons and my previous paragraph was the third reason that I think why they do not respect the woman. So my paragraph is to correct the openion of the women ability : )
I'm a girl and I belive in WOMAN
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the woman is less confidence and independent
Is it right to use less confidence or it should be less confident?
Is it right to use less confidence or it should be less confident?
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Hello, Nana. I am not a teacher but would like to help you. What I see from that part of your essay is that you still make some obvious mistakes.
The third idea for women’s rights is to make her privilege to lead a big business (Company or Industry). Some of the business companies prefer to hire a man not a woman even if they both have the sa
The third idea for women’s rights is to make her privilege to lead a big business (Company or Industry). Some of the business companies prefer to hire a man not a woman even if they both have the sa
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