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1/ today, more school leavers are unable to find a job. Discuss the cause of rising unemployment among young adults and suggests any solution

-> Now day, Most the graduates find it difficult to find a job. That made the number of unemployed on the increase. It is necessary to point out the reasons and suggest some plausible answers to this problem.

There are two explanations for this matter. The first obvious cause is that students are lack of career orientation before school. Some undergraduates have trend is they choose study the hot job which is choosed by everyone and of course that they do not have enjoyment. They do not pay attention so they get imperfect result. That the reason why they are unable to find job. The second factor could be learn passively. Students just study what professor give them. They do not initiative to search information for their lesson. Although undergraduates learns all the lessons of teacher, they still do not have knowledege enough to able to work There are a number of measures that can be adopted to tackle this issue. One remedy for this situation is that students should choose the right career for themselves. That will increase the quality of learning. Graduates have a good skills will more opportunities for job. Another way to resolve this matter is proactive learning. That practice for student more studious, flexible and progressive spirit which are Employers expect In conclusion, certain aspect such as lack of career orientation before school and learning passively contribute to this phenomenon. However, this issue can be addressed by choosing right career and having proactive learning.