HELP ME PLEASE ASP

i neeed help writeing this poem im going into the army but i cant seem to finish it well anyone help me please

The Solider Thats Within

Freedom is not free you must fight for it day by day ....

leading my self into the red,white, an blue i walked up with pride....

i took each waken step to fight for the freedom of my homeland and loved one's.....

that is when the solider that was within had started to cry out ...

my family weep's as I touched out to them ....

not knowing when or how long i'll be gone.....

not knowing when or if i'll come home to them once more....

but i sent myself there to fight for what i believe ....

i stood next to my brother's in arms to the end .....

watching each an every one of us fighting with pride....

at night's i spend my time hoping to see your face once more....

but if we fall we will live in a echo of eternal glory.....

And you will never miss us when were gone Because we are the best in each one of you.....

We are the proud the few American Solider's ......

so you would recognize us just to see who we truely are ...

we are distant blinking star's nothing more nor less....

we died and lived among the world only leaving tears and sorrow behind...

only if we had peace but life is not easy.... you must fight for what you belive.....