I already gave you some very basic tips on how to write better. I even corrected your sentence, yet you have posted it again here with all its original errors. I feel that I wasted my time.
New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.
Anonymous Hey, can anyone help me to i need some one to correct my essayIf you post it in a new thread, someone can help you. We can't help what we can't see.