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Chesneymonkey Posted 20 years ago
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00Hello everybody,02p

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00I need help with motivation letter for scholarschip for 2 days conference in Italy. If I won´t get it, I would not be allowed to go there, because our lab hasn´t got money for travelling. Could you please check it if it make sense and also if grammar is correct? I am not much experienced in English:-(( I have to send it til the end of this week. Thank you so so much in advance02p

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00Dear Mrs. ***,02p

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00I would like to apply for scholarship in the opportunity of the First ESH Euroconference On Tumor Banks And Downstream Applications, March 10-12 in Florence. It is important for me to incorporate an international experience into my doctoral study.02p

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00I am now in the second year of my study and I am working on my doctoral thesis in Center of Oncocytogenetics in Prague. My work is based on molecular-cytogenetic methods i.e. to be specific I analyse the presence of bladder cancer cells in urine samples using centromeric and locus-specific probes for I-FISH, isolate DNA from brain and analyse chromosomal abberations using CGH method. The routine work in our lab consist of analyses of chromosomal aberrations in oncohematological samples. I have already presented results of my work at few conferences in the Czech republic, but I have never visited any conference abroad.02p

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00I think this event would broaden my scientific experience, it would give me the opportunity to meet researchers from other countries, discuss problems and new approaches to my work.02p

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00Thank you very much for considering my application. I look forward to your response.02p

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00Yours sincerely Lucie Houskova02p

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00Lucie Houskova02p

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0Hi Lucie,02br 02br 00You have written a good letter. 02br 02br 00Clive02br 02br 01font 00Dear Mrs. ***,02font 02br 02br 01font 00I would like to apply for a scholarship to give me the opportunity to attend the First ESH Euroconference On Tumor Banks And Downstream Applications, March 10-12 in Florence.

— Clive

  • 0Hi Lucie,02br 02br 00You have written a good letter.
  • 02br 02br 00Clive02br 02br 01font 00Dear Mrs.
  • ***,02font 02br 02br 01font 00I would like to apply for a scholarship to give me the opportunity to attend the First ESH Euroconference On Tumor Banks And Downstream Applications, March 10-12 in Florence.
  • 02font 02br 02br 01font 00I am now in the second year of my studies and I am working on my doctoral thesis in the Center of Oncocytogenetics in Prague.
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0Hi Lucie,02br
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00You have written a good letter. I've made a few changes, please read carefully.02br
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00Good luck with the scholarship, and with your work.02br
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00Clive02br
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01font00Dear Mrs. ***,02font02br
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0Hi Clive,02br
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00thank you very very much for your help:-)) I try to improve my English everyday, but it is so hard. Especially this formal letters:-(. Thanks again. I hope once I would help somebody as you helped me:-))02br
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00Bye.02br
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00Lucie0-
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0Hi Clive,02br
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00Thank you very very much for the correction. I try to improve my English everyday, but it is so hard, especiall these formal letters:-(( I think this Englisforum is the best website, I have ever found. Thanks again.02br
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00Bye 02br
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00Lucy0-
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