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Anonymous Posted 21 years ago
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Please, check this text. This is my homework for english lesson and I don't know if it is correct or not...
When the classroom door opened, everybody went silent. It was our last Friday's lesson - Maths. All of us are thinking about weekend but before we must to do a test. It was sunny and hot outside. After hard week not all were prepered for test. Our teacher slowly entered the classroom and sat at desk. He started takeing the register. Only two students were absent, whole the rest was present. Teacher closed register while we were prepareing for hell.
- "Test will proceed next week" - teacher said. - "I forgot prepare questions for you".
Suddenly quiet class started screaming.
- "Silent ! - Before I will change sentence" - teacher warned. Everybody went silent again.
- "Now you are free, and you can go home. I wish you good weekend".
- "Thank you and goodbye" - answer the students and fast leave the classroom.
When the classroom door opened, everybody went silent. It was our last Friday's lesson - Maths. All of us are thinking about weekend but before we must to do a test. It was sunny and hot outside. After hard week not all were prepered for test. Our teacher slowly entered the classroom and sat at desk. He started takeing the register. Only two students were absent, whole the rest was present. Teacher closed register while we were prepareing for hell.
- "Test will proceed next week" - teacher said. - "I forgot prepare questions for you".
Suddenly quiet class started screaming.
- "Silent ! - Before I will change sentence" - teacher warned. Everybody went silent again.
- "Now you are free, and you can go home. I wish you good weekend".
- "Thank you and goodbye" - answer the students and fast leave the classroom.
Top answer
When the classroom door opened, everybody went silent. It was our last lesson on Friday : Math. All of us are thinking about the weekend but before we can go, we must take a test.
- When the classroom door opened, everybody went silent.
- It was our last lesson on Friday : Math.
- All of us are thinking about the weekend but before we can go, we must take a test.
- It was sunny and hot outside.
- After a hard week we were not all prepered for the test.
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