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Heres this poem that is meant to emulate "Huswifery"
Hope you like it

Sing With Me Ye Seraphim…

Make me, O Lord, Thy Joyous Voice resound
Thy Holy Word the Lyrics make for me
Make mine Emotions Thy crisp notes true sound
And make my Mouth Thy Instrument to be
My holy song to be Thy only Praise
So to you, O Lord, all hands come to raise

Make me Thy melody so gold and pure
And make Thy Holy Spirit gentle chimes
Then sing the Song Thyself. The sound notes sure.
Thy caring embrace in heavenly rhymes
Then show the same in Heavenly Tones Choice
Adorned with your gracious, proceeding Voice

Then serenade therewith mine Soul and Heart
Honor, Action, Thought, Word, and lastly Voice
So that with your forgiving word not part
And all my hymns give Thee praise and glory
My voice a wonderful song before Ye