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Chiageraldine Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Help me out on this one
Friends, please bear with me. I know I ask a lot of questions.
Which sentence is clearer and structurally/grammatically correct?
"To excel in my profession of writing articles for clients and to submit them witin the specified period of time."
OR
""To excel in my profession of writing articles for clients by submitting them within the specified period of time."
Both sound okay to me. But I have a feeling that the first one is more vague than the second. Is it not? Or maybe both sentences are just fine. Comments and analysis please.. THANK YOU SO MUCH!
Which sentence is clearer and structurally/grammatically correct?
"To excel in my profession of writing articles for clients and to submit them witin the specified period of time."
OR
""To excel in my profession of writing articles for clients by submitting them within the specified period of time."
Both sound okay to me. But I have a feeling that the first one is more vague than the second. Is it not? Or maybe both sentences are just fine. Comments and analysis please.. THANK YOU SO MUCH!
Top answer
chiageraldine: Neither one is a complete sentence - both are fagments, lacking a main subject and verb. " But submitting a piece of writing within an agreed deadline is not the only measure of excellence. Perhaps you can give other reasons such as quality (clarity, accuracy, expressiveness and style) and meeting the clients' requirements such as word count, scope and organization of content.
- chiageraldine: Neither one is a complete sentence - both are fagments, lacking a main subject and verb.
- " But submitting a piece of writing within an agreed deadline is not the only measure of excellence.
- Perhaps you can give other reasons such as quality (clarity, accuracy, expressiveness and style) and meeting the clients' requirements such as word count, scope and organization of content.
- All the best, A- s
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chiageraldine:
Neither one is a complete sentence - both are fagments, lacking a main subject and verb. Here is a suggestion:
My goal for the future is to excel in my profession of writing articles for clients by submitting them within the specified period of time."
But submitting a piece of writing within an agreed deadline is not the only measure of exce
Neither one is a complete sentence - both are fagments, lacking a main subject and verb. Here is a suggestion:
My goal for the future is to excel in my profession of writing articles for clients by submitting them within the specified period of time."
But submitting a piece of writing within an agreed deadline is not the only measure of exce
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Hi,
Which sentence is clearer and structurally/grammatically correct?
"To excel in my profession of writing articles for clients and to submit them witin the specified period of time."
OR
""To excel in my profession of writing articles for clients by submitting them within the specified period of time."
I'd like to comment o
Which sentence is clearer and structurally/grammatically correct?
"To excel in my profession of writing articles for clients and to submit them witin the specified period of time."
OR
""To excel in my profession of writing articles for clients by submitting them within the specified period of time."
I'd like to comment o
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