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Anonymous Posted 5 years ago
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Help me make sense of the sentence below please

I decided that, in order to get as true a picture as possible, I'd need to turn to my family, friends and neighbours, whose ancestors had fought for freedom at the time. Out of this, a picture of wartime West Cork and the huge contribution its brave volunteers made to winning what, on paper, was an impossible fight.


I feel like there is something missing here. A verb probably? (p.s. this was taken from a book)

  

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anonymous Out of this, (there came (to me)) a picture of wartime West Cork and the huge contribution its brave volunteers made to winning what, on paper, was an impossible fight. Yes, it's missing a verb. I imagine that we're supposed to add (mentally) something like the expression shown above.

  • anonymous Out of this, (there came (to me)) a picture of wartime West Cork and the huge contribution its brave volunteers made to winning what, on paper, was an impossible fight.
  • Yes, it's missing a verb.
  • I imagine that we're supposed to add (mentally) something like the expression shown above.
  • Occasionally you'll see this kind of literary stylistic device in books.
  • CJ
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anonymousOut of this, (there came (to me)) a picture of wartime West Cork and the huge contribution its brave volunteers made to winning what, on paper, was an impossible fight.

Yes, it's missing a verb. I imagine that we're supposed to add (mentally) something like the expression shown above.

Occasionally you'll s

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In my view, the given passage is perfect as written, nothing is "missing" here. The wording of the second sentence captures the drama of the seemingly hopeless fight at the time

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