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Anonymous Posted 7 years ago
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Help me make it sound better

Hi teachers, can you help me make this sound better?

He gave her a look, then turned back to continue drinking.

  

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He gave her a look, and then turned back to continue drinking.

— Clive

  • He gave her a look, and then turned back to continue drinking.
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He gave her a look, and then turned back to continue drinking.

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anonymouscan you help me make this sound better?

Use a stronger, more specific verb, depending what kind of look you're describing.

He glared at her, ... / He smiled at her, ... / He rolled his eyes, ... / He grinned, ... / He scowled at her ...,

CJ

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