Help me in reviewing my motivational letter

Dear Sir,
I, Aqsa Ali have done my bachelors in Electronics Engineering from Mehran University of Engineering and Technology, Jamshoro, Sindh, Pakistan. I am a forward looking and well enthusiastic person who marks to be different one from others, who loves to experiment with new and innovative things. Despite of choosing the most common professions (like medical, and teaching) which is likely to be taken by girls in thought of my family, friends, relatives and my teacher as well; I want to be an engineer, a successful one who want to prove herself compatible engineer without discrimination of being girl or boy. And by the grace of Allah, I am the only girl engineer in my family now.
From my earlier studies till graduation I possess good academic records. I always stood in toppers and I was among the compatible student in eyes of my teacher and supervisors. From choosing Engineering as my profession to being selected as topper from my city; I have never disappointed the people who have expectations in me.
One thing which is a great source of motivation to me is the gained experience, which I have been through academic years in university, but special learning greatly deals with final year project to which I still dispose to extend; as things are vividly described in Research proposal. After doing bachelor in Electronics Engineering I have come to know the wide spectrum of this field. In my FYP I have learned an advance programming language Python which is rarely used in our region and specially in my university. There was no one to support us in this regard I myself manage to learn it and completed the project successfully.
After examining my interest, skills and ambitions to learn innovative and advance things I decided to peruse my master studies in foreign university. So that I can fulfill my dream of becoming successful professional who is able to serve her people and her country in best regards. Additionally, abroad study experience provides a great grounding in my professional career.
The reason I wish to pursue my Master studies in Hungry because I am very much impressed by the development history and education achievements Hungry have. The subjects offered in Hungarian Scholarship Program are specifically in line with my professional goals. Moreover, I love to explore the culture of Europe and want to promote my culture there as well. This would be a perfect opportunity for me to not only explore different cultures but a bright chance to prove myself and to achieve landmark in my career.
I believe, if I have awarded with this chance of scholarship which leads me to become a part of one of the top universities among the world, it will excel my academic career as well as I will be able for making big move in my field. I assure you that I would keep up my diligence and good demeanor during the course. I hope you find my purpose definitive and I fit in to your image of a promising graduated student. I look forward to proving myself.
Hope to receive a positive acknowledgement from your side. I will be looking forward for it.
Regards,
Aqsa Ali