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Austria is place Mozart born. This is country very most beautiful. It has place reputation like salzburg, Fortress, Innsbrucker. Austria was designated is place have landscape best in the world. Annually have much traveller go to Austria. Many foods famous: Soup,Spreads,Tafelspitz, Apple-pie soaked insugar,Beefsteak, Chocolate Sachertorte Cake.

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You must write more carefully. You are just beginning to learn English. You are trying very hard, but you need to start learning with simple sentences and words. Your sentences are not good English. You are trying to write at a more advanced level. Here are your sentences. I have added correct versions.

This is not a good sentence.

Austria is place Mozart born.

Here are

This is not a good sentence.

Austria is place Mozart born.

Here are some good sentences:

Austria is the birthplace of Mozart.
Austria is where Mozart was born.
Mozart was born in Austria.

This is not a good sentence.

This is country very most beautiful

Here are some good sentences:

Austria is a very beautiful country.
This country is very beautiful.

This is not a good sentence.

It has place reputation like salzburg, Fortress, Innsbrucker.

This is a good sentence. Notice that place names must begin with capital letters.

It has famous cities and places like Hohensalzburg Fortress, Salzburg and Innsbruck.

This is not a good sentence.

Austria was designated is place have landscape best in the world.

Austria has some of the most beautiful landscapes in the world.

This is not a good sentence.

Annually have much traveller go to Austria.

Much is for non-count nouns: I don't have much money. He ate too much food and now he is sick.

Many travellers go to Austria each year.

This is not a sentence at all. THere is no verb. All sentences have a verb.

Many foods famous: Soup,Spreads,Tafelspitz, Apple-pie soaked insugar,Beefsteak, Chocolate Sachertorte Cake.

Notice the difference between common nouns (no capital letter) and proper nouns (names beginning with capital letters.)

Austria is famous for its good food. These are delicious: soup, spreads, Tafelspitz, apple pie soaked in sugar, beefsteak, and Chocolate Sachertorte Cake.

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