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Anianiani Posted 13 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
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hi .. I want to check up my essay from toefl .
Food is importent for our bodies . it's impossible to live without any food. we need differend ingredients to make some delicious food. in this modern world it's posibble do prepare food vert fast. a several years ago preparation of food needed much time , it's becous the food would be more delicious and more healthfull,,,
There are many delicious food in our refrigerators , but are they healthfull for our bodies ? it's a difficult question for the world .
In the fast food's object the food looks like a very delicious and healfull, but god knows what is in it . it is a very unhealthfull for our bodies. this food is made by frozen meat , which isnot good for our health..
it was a bad part of modern food preparation , but technological inventions has a good parts too ...
For example : The modern technics can save leftovers untill we eat them . the microwave ovens can prepare meal much faster then in the past.
Freezers , canning , refrigerators can save fruits and vegetables . So we always have chance to eat everything what we want ..
So it's my opinion that the digital improves has bad and good parts . we have choice : if we follow fastfood , our health will get bad . but if we dont follow them and eat healthfull food life will be more better .. the choice is on our own ....
Friday, 9:57 pm
Food is importent for our bodies . it's impossible to live without any food. we need differend ingredients to make some delicious food. in this modern world it's posibble do prepare food vert fast. a several years ago preparation of food needed much time , it's becous the food would be more delicious and more healthfull,,,
There are many delicious food in our refrigerators , but are they healthfull for our bodies ? it's a difficult question for the world .
In the fast food's object the food looks like a very delicious and healfull, but god knows what is in it . it is a very unhealthfull for our bodies. this food is made by frozen meat , which isnot good for our health..
it was a bad part of modern food preparation , but technological inventions has a good parts too ...
For example : The modern technics can save leftovers untill we eat them . the microwave ovens can prepare meal much faster then in the past.
Freezers , canning , refrigerators can save fruits and vegetables . So we always have chance to eat everything what we want ..
So it's my opinion that the digital improves has bad and good parts . we have choice : if we follow fastfood , our health will get bad . but if we dont follow them and eat healthfull food life will be more better .. the choice is on our own ....
Friday, 9:57 pm
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I can think of three things you can do without any assistance from others. Firstly, run a spell checker across this. It will find a large number of the errors that you have made.
- I can think of three things you can do without any assistance from others.
- Firstly, run a spell checker across this.
- It will find a large number of the errors that you have made.
- Secondly, make sure that every sentence begins with a capital letter.
- Thirdly, write "healthy" in place of "healthfull".
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I can think of three things you can do without any assistance from others. Firstly, run a spell checker across this. It will find a large number of the errors that you have made. Secondly, make sure that every sentence begins with a capital letter. Thirdly, write "healthy" in place of "healthfull".
If you find time to do those three things and re-post your essay, then I will find ti
If you find time to do those three things and re-post your essay, then I will find ti
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thank you for advice ... now i have not time to rewrite this but i'll write it later
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