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Sand-dumes Posted 18 years ago
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help me form the follwing better

Hi..
Please go through the follwoing text and suggest reformation.

to improve breakfast experience, selection, and service for our Hotal Guests following was suggested.
  

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In order to improve the breakfast experience, selection, and service for our hotel guests the following was/were suggested:

  • In order to improve the breakfast experience, selection, and service for our hotel guests the following was/were suggested:
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In order to improve the breakfast experience, selection, and service for our hotel guests the following was/were suggested:
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thanks for this prompt reply, but can you also suggest another word instead of experience!!

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experience is quite good in the context

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