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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Help me fix these 2 sentences please and thank you
1. High school and college have similarties because most of the things that are done in high school is done in college just much difficult.
2. High school and college instructors, the curriulums, and the schedules are the three most important things that have similarites and differencess
(this is suppose to be my thesis statement)
Please help
2. High school and college instructors, the curriulums, and the schedules are the three most important things that have similarites and differencess
(this is suppose to be my thesis statement)
Please help
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It isn't quite clear what you're trying to say; is your thesis making a comparison between high school and university? (Remember that college and university are different things, unless you are writing within the US. Outside of America, a college is a department of a university - For example, the College of Fine Arts is part of the University of New South Wales.
- It isn't quite clear what you're trying to say; is your thesis making a comparison between high school and university?
- (Remember that college and university are different things, unless you are writing within the US.
- Outside of America, a college is a department of a university - For example, the College of Fine Arts is part of the University of New South Wales.
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It isn't quite clear what you're trying to say; is your thesis making a comparison between high school and university? (Remember that college and university are different things, unless you are writing within the US. Outside of America, a college is a department of a university - For example, the College of Fine Arts is part of the University of New South Wales. College can also mean a tafe or in
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Neither of these sentences is a good thesis statement for your essay.
They certainly are about the points you have chosen to make your argument, but your thesis must state what conclusion you are going to draw.
Also, look in a thesarus for some words you can use instead of "similarity" and "difference". That will give you the basis for some variety of vocabulary in your essay.
They certainly are about the points you have chosen to make your argument, but your thesis must state what conclusion you are going to draw.
Also, look in a thesarus for some words you can use instead of "similarity" and "difference". That will give you the basis for some variety of vocabulary in your essay.
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