Help me finish this song for my band!

Hey my name in Ryan, and my band is called Alone In December.

Here are my lyrics...

Live from a vacant lot.

Everything that you dread

So cry if your feeling feint.

Because we got the bright lights and there all on you.

So why are you holding back? (We want more)

You got nothing to lose. (Yeah yeah)

15 minutes and your life would be over in a flash.

These words unspoken seem so foreign.

But have you heard this one?

"I will stay with you forever"

But what you say is truth is enough to drive a person to hell.

The hair stands on the back of your neck.

Your crying for a way out, another way out.

But there’s a bath tub filled with gasoline, a pistol, and blood awaiting you at home.

All the lies that you have told have now came back to haunt you.

But we wont suffer or be broken in anyway.

I would have kept you forever.

But look at what you have done.

You ended for both of us.

We both lost control and now without you I can finally see.

JUST LOOK IT OVER AND HELP ME MAKE IT GREAT!