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Simpleseasub Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Help me find out grammatical error here , please help ?

Its only the rhyming of words , I don't think its a poem!!
You treat me as the stranger , though I rocognize you and I told your name !!!!
You can't do mistake in life , because life is not a game !!!!!
Though we are walking in different direction ,I know our destiny is same ,I know our destiny is same
..........................to be continued ..................
  

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You treat me as a strange, though I recognize you and I told your name !!!! You can't do mistakes in this life, because life is not a game !!!!! Though we are walking in different directions, I know our destiny is same, I know our destiny is one

— Jordicuest

  • You treat me as a strange, though I recognize you and I told your name !!!!
  • You can't do mistakes in this life, because life is not a game !!!!!
  • Though we are walking in different directions, I know our destiny is same, I know our destiny is one
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You treat me as a strange, though I recognize you and I told your name !!!!
You can't do mistakes in this life, because life is not a game !!!!!
Though we are walking in different directions, I know our destiny is same, I know our destiny is one
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You treat me as a stranger, though I recognize you and I said your name!
You can't make mistakes in life, because life is not a game.
Though we are walking in different directions, I know our destinies are the same.

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Thank you so much fivejedjon. There is another short poem, it will be my pleasure if you can review and point out my grammatical mistakes there.

Greetings from Nepal
Sagar
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