Help me! Could u please help me in correcting my motivation letter?
0Dear Sir or Madam,02br 02br 02br 02br 00I am writing to apply as an exchange student for the Erasmus Program at the University of Copenhagen for the autumn semester. I am an Lithuanian student attending my second semester of Biosocial environment and nutrition studies at the XXX University.02br 02br 02br 02br 00The Erasmus programme seems like the perfect opportunity to meet other cultures, learn another language, experience other educational system and enrich my curriculum vitae, as well as gain more independence.02br 02br 02br 00I like my speciality, it is00 00interesting and important and in the future it will be more and more important, because of these features I00 00chose it. 00Nutrition is a very complex science. It involves the interpretation of scienific knowledge about food in relation to health and disease to use this knowledge in a practical way to help people change their eating habits, to improve their health and prevent them from acquiring diet-related diseases.02br 02br 02br 02br 00I know that the experience of studying abroad will help me to develop myself and to improve my knowledge. 00I chose your country and your university because I am interesting in your university and also I want to compare studies in Lithuania and in foreign countries. And I chose your country, because Denmark is very interesting and beautiful country , I always wanted to visit it.02br 02br 02br 02br 01i00Spending one semester at the02i00 University of Copenhagen01i00 will improving my English language abilities and culture knowledge in the inspiring, creative and cosmopolite environment.02i02br 02br 02br 02br 01i00Thank you for considering my request. I look forward to your positive response.02i02br 02br 02br 02br 01i00Yours Faithfully,02i02br 02br 02br 02br 0-
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