Help me correct Writing B1. Thanks in advance

Dear Lisa,

How’s going? I’ve got your letter and thanks a lot for writing. I’m really glad to hear from you.

Regarding your question, my favorite type of book is mystery. I must say mystery book is the best choice for me because I enjoy the cleverness of the detective and I like guess at what is coming next. In addition, it takes me away from ordinary world and makes my mind relax.

From my personal experiences, I think read on a printed book is better because it’s easy to touch and hold the book, you can bring it everywhere conveniently. I also see it’s easy to edit, you can mark without selecting required. Furthermore, printed books hold beautiful memories over many years. What do you think about this?

I hope to hear from you soon,

Love,

Ngan.