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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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Help me correct this formal letter?
Dear ____,
I write to you this letter to apply for admission to your school this coming academic year. I am sending you with this letter my application form and transcript of records.
I hope that I will be admitted to your school which is among the top schools in the country. I know that I will be able to get a good education at your school which will help me in pursuing a career in IT. I believe that my good scholastic records makes me a good candidate to become a student at your school. I am an industrious student and I take my studies very seriously. I hope you will give me this opportunity to become part of your distinguished institution.
Thank you and I hope for your kind consideration.
Respectfully yours,
__________
I'm transferring schools and they're requesting a Student’s letter seeking admission to their university. Thanks!
I write to you this letter to apply for admission to your school this coming academic year. I am sending you with this letter my application form and transcript of records.
I hope that I will be admitted to your school which is among the top schools in the country. I know that I will be able to get a good education at your school which will help me in pursuing a career in IT. I believe that my good scholastic records makes me a good candidate to become a student at your school. I am an industrious student and I take my studies very seriously. I hope you will give me this opportunity to become part of your distinguished institution.
Thank you and I hope for your kind consideration.
Respectfully yours,
__________
I'm transferring schools and they're requesting a Student’s letter seeking admission to their university. Thanks!
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Dear ____, I am writing to apply for admission to [ name of institution ] for academic year [year] . I have enclosed/attached my application form and transcript. I believe that my scholastic record makes me a good candidate for admission.
- Dear ____, I am writing to apply for admission to [ name of institution ] for academic year [year] .
- I have enclosed/attached my application form and transcript.
- I believe that my scholastic record makes me a good candidate for admission.
- I am an industrious student, and I take my studies very seriously.
- I hope you will give me this opportunity to become part of your distinguished institution.
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Dear ____,
I am writing to apply for admission to [name of institution] for academic year [year]. I have enclosed/attached my application form and transcript.
I believe that my scholastic record makes me a good candidate for admission. I am an industrious student, and I take my studies very seriously. I hope you will give me this opportunity to beco
I am writing to apply for admission to [name of institution] for academic year [year]. I have enclosed/attached my application form and transcript.
I believe that my scholastic record makes me a good candidate for admission. I am an industrious student, and I take my studies very seriously. I hope you will give me this opportunity to beco
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Dear ____,
I write to you this letter to apply for admission to your school this coming academic year. I am sending you with this letter my application form and transcript of records.
I hope that I will be admitted to your school which is among the top schools in the country. I know that I will be able to get a good education at your school which will help me in pursuin
I write to you this letter to apply for admission to your school this coming academic year. I am sending you with this letter my application form and transcript of records.
I hope that I will be admitted to your school which is among the top schools in the country. I know that I will be able to get a good education at your school which will help me in pursuin
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