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Jiangyueming Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Help me correct these three short sentences. Thank you.

They prefer to live in villages. Price level in the village is not as much high as in the city. So they can afford necessities.
  

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jiangyueming They prefer to live in villages Price level in the village is not as much high as in the city. So they can afford necessities. Your sentence is understood fine.

  • jiangyueming They prefer to live in villages Price level in the village is not as much high as in the city.
  • So they can afford necessities.
  • Your sentence is understood fine.
  • But if you want to improve it so that it sounds natural, I prefer to say this: They prefer to live in villages because cost of living is not as high as it the city, and necessities are more affordable.
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jiangyuemingThey prefer to live in villages Price level in the village is not as much high as in the city. So they can afford necessities.
Your sentence is understood fine. But if you want to improve it so that it sounds natural, I prefer to say this:
They prefer to live in villages because cost of living is not as high as it the city, and necess
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jiangyuemingThey prefer to live in villages. Price level in the village is not as much high as in the city. So they can afford necessities.
They prefer to live in villages. Prices in a village are not as high as in a city so people can more easily afford necessities.

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