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Jiangyueming Posted 14 years ago
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Help me correct these three sentences. Thank you!!!

If you buy a electric vehicle, let's say, BYD, a car brand in my country, you have to spend more than sixty thousand RMB than the counterpart but using fossil fuel energy. If a person earn 5000 RMB monthly, it will take him/her one year to make sixty thousand RMB without spending it in other places. He/her will think definitely twice when he/she buy a electric vehicle.
  

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I have underlined some problem areas. Please correct them and post your revised text here. If you buy a electric vehicle, let's sa y, BY D, a car brand in my country, you have to spend more than sixty thousand RM B tha n the counterpart but using fossil fuel energy.

— Mister Micawber

  • I have underlined some problem areas.
  • Please correct them and post your revised text here.
  • If you buy a electric vehicle, let's sa y, BY D, a car brand in my country, you have to spend more than sixty thousand RM B tha n the counterpart but using fossil fuel energy.
  • If a person earn 5000 RMB monthly, it will take him/her one year to make sixty thousand RMB without spending it in other places.
  • He/her will think definitely twice when he/she buy a electric vehicle.
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I have underlined some problem areas. Please correct them and post your revised text here.

If you buy a electric vehicle, let's say, BYD, a car brand in my country, you have to spend more than sixty thousand RMB than the counterpart but using fossil fuel energy. If a person earn 5000 RMB monthly, it will take him/her one year to make sixty thousand RMB
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Thank you. Here is my revision:If you buy a electric vehicle, let's say, a BYD, a car brand in my country, you have to spend more than sixty thousand RMB than the counterpart using fossil fuel energy. If people person earn 5000 RMB monthly, it will take them one year to make sixty thousand RMB without spending it in other places. They will definitely think twice when he/she buy an electric vehi
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If you buy an electric vehicle, let's say, a BYD, a car brand in my country, you have to spend more than sixty thousand RMBs more than for the counterpart using fossil fuel energy. If people earn 5000 RMB monthly, it will take them one year to make sixty thousand RMBs if they don't spend it in other places. They will definitely think twice before buying an
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