HELP ME CORRECT THESE SENTENACES

Question

Read each of the following short passages. Correct the mistakes by re-writing the sentence in the box. There are no correct sentences; each example has at least one error in it. Parts of the passage may be correct. You need only re-write the sentence that you are correcting in some way. Errors you may find include pronoun agreement, comma use, apostrophe use, run-ons, and fragments.

1.	I have discovered that you can tell a lot about a persons view of animals by the pet that they choose.

2. The first group includes fish owners. Anyone who belongs in this category feels that animals should never be allowed to disturb their life.

3.	Because a fish owner wants peace and quiet. They will choose a pet that will never make any noise.

Feebs11 · Accepted Answer

You make the first attempt, post your suggestions, and we can comment.

Dmoves2255 · Answer

Feebs11You make the first attempt, post your suggestions, and we can comment.

THIS IS WHAT I HAVE SO FAR.

1.	I have discovered that you can tell a lot about a person’s view of animals, by the pet that they choose.

2.	The first group includes fish owners. Anyone, who belongs in this category, feels that animals should never be allowed to disturb their life.

3.	Because, a fish owner wants peace and quiet, they will choose a pet that will never make any noise.

4.	A second kind of pet owner, is a bird person. Anyone in this group is willing to let their pet disturb their life occasionally.

5.	Bird owners, do not demand peace and quiet from a pet. They can always put a cover over the bird cage, when they don't want to hear any noise.

6.	For another characteristic, the bird owner is willing to let the pet out of the cage, so it can fly freely. However, the owner can put the bird back in the cage, when he or she doesn't want to bother with the pet.

7.	Next, is the cat lover, a cat lover is willing to let their pets disturb their lives at any time.

8.	Cats are very independent, so the cat lover doesn’t have to be home at a certain time each day to walk the cat.

9.	Then, there are dog owners. They want to give a lot of love to an animal; they choose a pet that likes a lot of love and affection.

10.

Dogs need a lot of attention, they have to be walked at various times during the day, and the dog person must schedule his or her life around the life of the pet.

Dmoves2255 · Answer

why is it posting funny?

Feebs11 · Answer

Are you cutting and pasting?

Dmoves2255 · Answer

yes no help yet <img class='emoticon' style='Width:19px;Height:19px;' data-delaysrc='https://uat-englishforward-forums-backend.s3.us-west-2.amazonaws.com/Emoticons/6.gif' src='https://uat-englishforward-forums-backend.s3.us-west-2.amazonaws.com/Emoticons/6.gif' alt='Emotion: sad'/>

Clive · Answer

Hi,

It's your awkward format that makes people reluctant to offer help.

If you do some work to repost all this in a more normal way that is easier to understand, I'm sure that someone will be happy to look at your answers and correct them.

Best wishes, Clive

HELP ME CORRECT THESE SENTENACES

Top answer

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

Related Questions