Help me correct my song

Hi, I'm from Spain, and I wrote a song. Can you please tell me if I made awful mistakes? Thanks!!!

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we can't wait, we're getting there,
they should be arriving up on time
we're getting closer

Had enough,
bad times: gone!.
We hope to be allowed to make some noise.
We're gonna spend all night long

Just leave your mind lose tonight,
And dance with a brighter light
Missing something in your eyes
And leave those streams light the road to your land

No, we will never come back
Oh, Let me stay or let me die
Fill the glass and let me jump
You breath this life untill it's done

Let me breathe just for a while
break the map, we know it's just a lie
I hope you don't matter
hope you don't matter

Second try, prepare yourself
modify, we're being someone else
lights up, we're going again