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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Help me correct my essays...Thank you

Now already 28 march 2010,so long time no come to see my blog.Because my blog really less
people come support and no any people see my blog let me feel empty but never mind,now i want improve my English so i will everyday come blog to write my dairy and hope have people can come support my blog.I English is really very poor.I am a form 5 student,but my writing skills very poor.Now i feel afraid to meet my SPM and my future.I afraid my English poor must influence
my future,so now i must want hardworking to improve my English skill.Now i will start to write blog by English because one day Iarranged my book want take to my mum shop.I arranged book to see have any my favorite book,if have I want to collect.However,I checked book and arranged book.Suddenly,I holding one book is about academic.This book title is "shao nian",so i look this book content.When i turn to page 58.I see the title is about "concentrate can bring good exam result".
After that,i see a small box at the upper left corner.I see a man introduction,this man is a lecturer about how to improve result.The small box also has a webs,so i keep the page to Sunday and search this web.Sunday coming,i wake up at 9.30am and my mum call me to market help her buy coconut and my dad call me buy nasi lemak.After that,I go back my home and start to eat
my breakfast.After eating,I open my computer to search that web.The web many contents about how to improve result and study.I see have a content is about how to improve English,so i open the
link and see the contents can how to help me advanced.I see a contents is everyday write dairy can help our improve writing skill,so I now starting to write my blog.I must improve my English
to care my SPM result.In addition,the web have content i feel very good is about dictionary have 50000 words but ordinary we use at daily of speaking is 3000 words only,so if me know this
3000 words and meaning my English must can advanced.I feel grateful can encounter the book and this web.After that,i also use google to search have what web can improve my English.
From now,i must improve my English and other subject.I want my SPM can take many A!!!If my English grammar and words usage have any wrong please help me correction.Thank you very much.
  
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