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A large number of people left the their hometown to the cities. What do you think about the advantages and disadvantages of living in a large city?

Nowadays, many people tend to choose lives in large cities due to its several benefits. Besides, there are also a few disadvantages in this community.

Living in a city has a number of good points. Firstly, people are supported and helped by convenient services like health care services, educational facilities, modern technology and public transportation, for instance. This led to people's quality lives are much more improved, they feel more comfortable and fulfilled more over the past. In addition, most peole like to live in a lively environment rather than a quiet one, a busy and modern lifestyle gives them more experience with a lot of amazing things that they never have in countryside. Moreover, a developed place has more opportunities for employment.

In the another aspects, life in cities also has some drawbacks. The fist point is the traffic. Every time, a greal deal of vehicles commute on the road especially on the main road. Consequently, It's not unusual has traffic congestion that negatively impact on human's health as well as the environment due to lots of noise and smoke from lorries and motorbikes. The weather in there is not as good as in the countryside, it is polluted and usually hot from greenhouse and means of transportation. However, the particular worst thing is more people feel lonely recently as a result of the insensitivity and intense work. They mostly under a lot of pressure and don't have time for their family and other relationships. That's reason why suicide's rate are increasing more than it was.

In my view, living in a large community is better than living in a small village. Despite negative features, we all have to accept that life in a city has brought more benefits with higher quality and modern lifestyle. Also, people would never feel bored and inadequate when they live here.